Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is believed that the

railways

ought to be wasted more

money

instead

of the new

roads

. I completely disagree with

this

opinion as there are several reasons. First of all, nowadays

governments

are spending more

money

to

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new

railways

.

However

,

governments

should resurface

to

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streets

in my country.

This

is because the

streets

are very ramshackle.

At these

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days, people are buying more

cars

for

their

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theirs

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.

Cars

are very popular in the world. Humans prefer to

more

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cars

.

For instance

, nowadays

cars

are going everywhere. As much as

,

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railways

do not go to where. In the world,

railways

are crumbling from day to day.

Therefore

,

governments

should invest more and more

money

to

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roads

. In my opinion,

this

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activities are very

benefit

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for people.

On the other hand

, some villages need to help

streets

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the streets

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.

This

is because some villages'

streets

do not resurface.

Governments

do not help

to

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their

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them

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. Because they

are

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take public

money

personally. It is

streets

are very terrible

during

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every

winters

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winter

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. And the summers, the

streets

are dusty.

For instance

, Uzbekistan's

some

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bucolic villages

do not resurface neither

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roads

. If

fair

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governor

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governors

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confirm

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, my country will prosper

every

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place.

Therefore

,

governments

should build

roads

first. In conclusion,

governments

ought to be invested

money

on

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new

railways

despite

on

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of

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roads

. I think

governments

will build on

roads

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every

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and every

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streets

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street

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in the future.