A cafe near your home put some chairs and tables on the pavement for customers. This creates a problem for you.Write a letter to the manager of the cafe to complain about this matter. In your letter, -Describe the problem -Explain how it affects you -Say what you will do if this matter is not resolved

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am your neighbour who is an apartment located next to your cafe. I usually decided to use

this

pathway in order to reach my business.

However

, I have noticed that on the individual's ,pavement there is a vast of mise en plus placed for 2 weeks. I am writing

this

letter to you to complain about your unfair area invasion. It is well known a fact that a colossal amount of people are using

this

path

such

as jogging, walking or running. Because of your greedy

behaviour

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many public has to veer their road in terms of your unfair setup.

Furthermore

, the people who live upstairs in your cafe, have disturbed by music and society talk. I am currently working in the JW Marriott Hotel as a Duty Manager. As part of my job task, I am obligated to work the whole night. When I came to the flat, I am not able to sleep

due to

your customer's voice.

This

letter is my

last

beacon for your property. If your management does not resolve

this

issue proactively, I precisely divert

this

incident through the municipality and the minister of the town. If you would like to contact me, I indicated the telephone number in the attachment. I would like to hear from you soon Yours sincerely, Erdinc Daghan Keserli

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Lexical resource: 8.0

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