The diagram shows how rainwater is collected for the use of drinking water in an Australian town.
The diagram illustrates the process of harvesting rainwater in order to produce drinking
water
for society in an Australian town.
Overall
, there are approximately six steps in the process of collecting rainwater, beginning with storing the rain and ending with generating sources of fresh water
for each of the houses.
First of all, rainwater is kept on the rooftops of accommodation, then
it runs down through the pipes system which leads to a water
filter. Having been filtered, the water
subsequently
transfers through the pipes to big storage where contains before it is treated.
At the following stage of the process, the water
must be moved to water
treatment by another pipe where it is mixed with chemicals to be fresh. Once the water
has been treated, then
it is pumped through the structure in each of the accommodations and these residents can utilize this
water
through their water
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