The line graph shows the percentage of people accessing news from 4 sources.

The line graph shows the percentage of people accessing news from 4 sources.
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The given line chart depicts the proportion of
people
using 4 different types of transportation media to access news namely: TVs, newspapers, radios and the
Internet
.
Overall
,
while
the popularity of the
Internet
increased, others did not. Look at the graph for more detail, more than two third of
people
watched
news
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on
TVs
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in 1995, it was the main source for
people
to receive information, and significantly decreased to 55% in 2000. In spite of an increase to almost 60% in 2000,
this
figure rapidly decline and it is expected to reach
a
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half in 2025.
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, the percentage of
people
who read newspapers and listened to
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radios
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witnessed a similar trajectory, from 55% and 52% respectively in 1995 to around a third in the year 2020. These statistics are forecasted to suffer a continuous trend to reach 30% and 22% respectively in the next 5 years. Despite the appearance of the
Internet
in 1995,
this
figure rose minimally to 3% in 2000. The ratio of
Internet
usage rocketed to approximately 40% in 2020 and
expected
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to reach a peak of 57% in 2025, surpassing
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television
to become the most popular media.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, internet with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 3 times.
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