The charts below show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country in 1958 and 2008. Summarize the information by selecting reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country in 1958 and 2008. Summarize the information by selecting reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The charts illustrate how working adults allocated their
time
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for different activities in a country in 1958 and 2008.
Overall
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, working adults spent the majority of their
time
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working,
while
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travelling to work and going out took up the least
amount
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of
time
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in 1958 and 2008, respectively.
Furthermore
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,
while
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the
time
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spent relaxing, sleeping, and going out decreased, the opposite was true for the other activities. In 1958, working occupied almost a third of the day (33%),
while
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sleeping accounted for slightly less
time
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(32%). At that
time
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, socializing with friends and family made up 19% of the total
amount
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of leisure
time
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. Only 16% of the
time
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was devoted to the remaining activities, including commuting to work, relaxing at home, and pursuing other interests or playing sports. 50 years later, the
amount
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of
time
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spent working rose by 9%,
whereas
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that spent sleeping fell by 7%.
While
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travel
time
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to work experienced a fourfold increase to 8%, the
amount
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of
time
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allocated to going out has significantly dropped to 6%. The
amount
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of
time
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spent unwinding at home and engaging in sports or other hobbies went up by 5% and 2%, respectively.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words time, amount with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 5 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Percentage
  • Proportion
  • Fluctuations
  • Increase
  • Decrease
  • Time allocation
  • Working adults
  • Activities
  • Comparison
  • Trend
  • Shift
  • Changes
  • Impact
  • Work-life balance
  • Lifestyle
  • Evolution
  • Daily routines
  • Technological changes
  • Social changes
  • Implications
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