In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

It is true that in some

part

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of our world,

people

are pursuing

to buy

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their own

home

rather than rent one. There are various reasons that can explain why

this

is the case. In my opinion,

this

trend could lead to more demerits than positive ones. The trend of buying

instead

of renting can be traced back to three main reasons. First of all, in many countries, it is widely acknowledged that buying own

home

is an indicator of financial power, which can

also

be understood as a symbol of social status.

For example

,

people

barely hear that an entrepreneur pays rent every month for his apartment.

Secondly

, owning a

home

means

this

house belongs

with

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you entirely, which

build

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up a sense of security, as

people

don't need to worry about whether the landlady would decide to cancel the contract

next

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day.

Furthermore

, nowadays

people

are keen on house investment as well,

therefore

owning a

home

could

also

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a result of

economic

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factor

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. I would argue that

this

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buying rather

renting

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could bring more disadvantages in

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future. It cannot be denied that

this

can lead to a boost

of

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economy

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, as there

are

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more

currency

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in our market.

However

,

this

can bring extra burdens and unessential stress to

people

living in those countries. In some cultures, one of the prerequisites of marriage is buying a new

home

for the couple on their own.

This

request and a series of ensuing disputes could even ruin the relationship.

Besides

, when

people

own their

home

in a certain place, they are more likely to be fixed there and thereby lose more possibilities, which I think is actually a pity. In conclusion, plenty of factors

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results

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the current prevalence of buying houses.

Personally

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I regarded it as a more negative

phenomenen

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phenomenon

phenomena

due to

the problems it may cause.