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In recent times, economic growth has helped many become richer, both in developed and developing countries. However, those in developed countries are not as happy as they were in the past. What do you think is this? What do you think can be learned from this?

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In previous years, the boost of the economy have flourished the
life
 of many
countries
 of underdeveloped and developed,
however
, the latter was not joyous as they are in years before. In
this
 essay, I will discuss the reason behind their discontentment and what could be learned. I would argue that as the economy grows
work
 increased and
people
 need to
work
 fast to keep up with the demand
this
 is more in the developed
countries
 that aim to become even richer. No quality of
life
 in
this
 type of working industry since they will be preoccupied with tons of
work
 on their plates and always on the edge. Like the
people
 in corporate businesses, they tend to forget to give themselves a break because of the pile of reports to be done and they often extended their hours in the office.
As a result
, they will be home late tired, and exhausted causing them unhappy with the way they live.
On the other hand
, underdeveloped nations, since they had a chance to see the happenings in their neighbouring state become resilient and content with their economic success will no longer be shaken by its impact.
People
 in developed
countries
 should Learn to prioritize and manage time wisely. Create a
work
-
life
 balance
life
-balance in order to experience a quality
life
 that money cannot buy, and not allow their success to
have
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 control over their
life
. In conclusion, I would argue that economic growth significantly impacts both
countries
 making them richer, and it has a negative effect on the developing country to
such
 that they were no longer happy because of a lack of
work-
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work-life balance
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life
-balance to keep up with the
work
 demand.
However
,
people
 must prioritization and time management to give themselves a quality of
life
.
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