The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future devlopment of the site. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two maps illustrate the specific layout of the industrial area in the town of Norbiton at present and its future development plan. In general, the current industrial factories is expected to be completely transformed into a residence with accommodations and a variety of new constructions.
The most notable change in the area from the plan is the removal of all factories which are going to be replaced by housing, amenities, and other services. To be more specific, a school is planned to be erected in the far east corner of the area with a playground on its right. A medical centre and shops will
also
be built in the centre, near the traffic roundabout.
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Moreover
, a bridge is expected to appear across the river connecting the current industrial factories with the farmland. Linking Words
In addition
, the farmland is planned to be partly replaced by additional houses and its surrounding roads.
In conclusion, the industrial zone is planned to be entirely removed, and a new residence is going to emerge.Linking Words
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