The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future devlopment of the site. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The two maps illustrate the specific layout of the industrial area in the town of Norbiton at present and its future development plan. In general, the current industrial factories is expected to be completely transformed into a residence with accommodations and a variety of new constructions. The most notable change in the area from the plan is the removal of all factories which are going to be replaced by housing, amenities, and other services. To be more specific, a school is planned to be erected in the far east corner of the area with a playground on its right. A medical centre and shops will

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be built in the centre, near the traffic roundabout.

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, a bridge is expected to appear across the river connecting the current industrial factories with the farmland.

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, the farmland is planned to be partly replaced by additional houses and its surrounding roads. In conclusion, the industrial zone is planned to be entirely removed, and a new residence is going to emerge.

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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

169 words

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The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future devlopment of the site. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Nowadays a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

"Many people believe that reducing the income gap between the rich and the poor can lead to a happier society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Too much emphasis is given for education of the young. More government money should be spent to free time activity of young people. To what extant do you agree or disagree.