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In many countries’ schools have severe problems with student behaviour. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

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It is widely observed that the behaviour of young
students
 across many countries has radically changed in recent times.
This
 essay will discuss the main reasons behind
this
 development in detail and
also
 suggest some measures through which
this
 issue can be resolved.
Due to
 the technological advancements in recent times,
students
 are often seen using
internet
 platforms like social media through mobile phones and computers. The
content
 which is available on
such
 platforms is entirely unfiltered and
contain
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 explicit material like dark humour and racist
slurrs
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slurs
. Exposure to
such
content
 cause direct implications on the cognitive development of
youth
 who end up developing negative traits like lack of discipline. Take meme culture as an instance, it has
cultivate
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 toxic radicalism in
youth
.
Furthermore
, lifestyle plays a major role in shaping the minds of individuals. Most
students
 have
unhealthy
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an unhealthy
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way
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ways
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 of living like
lack
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a lack
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 of physical activities and excessive consumption of junk food which directly contributes to
adverse
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the adverse
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 psychological
impact
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. A good illustration of
this
 is the fact that food items like burger
contains
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 toxins which trigger aggression in
human
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 brain.
As a result
,
students
 who consume fast food develop
short tempered
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 nature in their being.
However
, these concerns can be remediated through several measures. Most importantly, the parents
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, as well as school staff,
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as well as
 school staff should inculcate a habit of being diet conscious
to
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 the
students
.
This
 will help them in becoming more responsible
as well as
 ensure that their mental health is not at stake.
On the other hand
,
youth
 should not be allowed by their guardians to access
internet
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the internet
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 apart from their academics.
As a result
,
students
 will end up spending less time surfing
internet
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the internet
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 eventually avoiding toxic
content
 on it.
Although
 it may seem imperious to the
youth
, it will definitely bring a collective good for them. To sum it up,
this
 essay discussed the reasons behind concerning code of conduct found in
students
 across the globe. Exposure to explicit
content
 on the
internet
 combined with
unhealthy
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an unhealthy
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 lifestyle play
major
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a major
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 role in
students
 developing negative traits like excessive aggression and lack of discipline.
However
,
this
 essay
also
 illustrated that
this
 concerning trend can be fixed if
youth
 are made health conscious and not allowed to use
internet
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the internet
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.
Submitted by Mohammed Danishuddin on

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