The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000.Average distance in miles travelled per person per year
The table below illustrates data about differences in
type
of journey vehicles in Add an article
the type
in
England from 1985 to 2000
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Overall
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of tool in a transport system , Add an article
the type
the
transportation Correct article usage
apply
have
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has
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big Change the article
a
impacting
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impact
to
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on
lifes
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lives
life
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have
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has
The travel
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the car
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price is unexpensive
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inexpensive
been
a lot of utilises.
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be
Firstly
, in 1985 a walking , a car
, a local bus, a train and other hade been high level in the list furthermore
the numbers are 255, 3199 , 429, 289 and 450 respectively. At the same time, during 15 years the walking, and a local bus would be
gradually decrease so been 237, and 274. Particularly, the Unnecessary verb
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car
and other number
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numbers
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long-distance
a taxi numbers
hade been 51 ,54 and 13 in 1985. Correct the article-noun agreement
a taxi number
taxi numbers
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vehicles
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