The diagram below show the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950

The diagram below show the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950
The given diagram depicts how West Park Secondary
School
transformed over 60 years from 1950 to 2010.
Overall
, it can be seen that the place underwent some significant changes throughout the period with the expansion of the
school
building
as well as
the addition of a
car
parking and sports field. In 1950, the
school
had only one building located right next to a residential area. There was
also
a playground for students behind the
school
, and farmland to the southwest of it. 30 years later after the first alteration, all houses were demolished to make room for a new science block and a
car
parking lot. The farmland was removed to build a new sports field, which made the
school
area much larger than its first construction. In 2010, there were some other marked changes made.
Whereas
the science block and main building of the
school
remained the same, the
car
park was broadened to the south, which increased its area by threefold.
As a result
, the sports field and playground were shrunken for the enlargement of the
car
park.
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