Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development while others think it is important for children to go to school. Discuss both the advantages of each method and give your own opinion.

One of the major issues that concern our society today is whether youngsters should get educated from

home

or whether they should go to

school

. Strong arguments exist on both sides, which implies that it is worth examining both points of

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before reaching any conclusion. One argument put forward by those who advocate that it is beneficial for

children

to take

home

lessons

instead

of going to

school

is that young people feel more comfortable sharing their ideas.

For example

,

although

many students know the answers

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their teacher's questions, they

are not feel

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free to communicate

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because maybe they think that either their answers will be wrong or they do not have

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confidence.

For

this

reason, some parents believe that if

children

start taking

home

lessons

they will have better grades.

On the other hand

, numerous individuals are opposed to

this

viewpoint arguing that

school

plays a pivotal role in adolescents' life. They believe that

school

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an educational place is

also

a place where

children

can spend their day in a creative way. To be more precise, in

school

students have the opportunity to attend

also

to art

lessons

,

as well as

there are

lessons

regarding

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which make

children

feel relaxed and calm. As opposed to

home

lessons

in which young people need to stay in a room for many hours. To my mind,

school

is essential for students because in

this

way they can

also

improve their social skills.

For example

, they have the opportunity to interact with their peers and exchange their views.

Also

, they can make new friends and bond with them.

This

is something that I think is crucial for their mental health.

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home

lessons

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they do not have

this

chance because they interact only with their teachers.

As a result

, they end up feeling lonely.  In conclusion, it is my firm belief that youngsters need to attend courses at

school

and not at

home

because it is vital for their well-being. Never before have we seen so many

home

lessons

to be taken, as it is a modern way of education.