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Tourism has caused environment problem in many parts of the world. What sort of problems has been caused and what can be done about them.?

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The tourism industry is one of the essential industries in many countries. People visit other countries to explore and experience the culture. To accommodate
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 tourists the host countries usually cut down trees to build resorts and hotels.
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 is resulting in very serious ecological issues.
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 essay will discuss the problems and possible solutions to them. There are many problems because of
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. Tourists usually visit places like waterfalls and forests.
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 places are closely associated with nature and wildlife.
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, in ,Canada Niagara falls are one of the most visited places. During the 19th ,century it is assumed that there were more than 3 million trees around the falls. But today there are only a million left. Around 2 million of them were cut down to build hotels and casinos to accommodate tourists.
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 has caused serious biological issues. There are a few possible solutions to address these issues. One of them is the displacement of trees
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 of cutting them down.
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 the advancement of science and technology displacement of these is possible.
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, in ,India a very recent experiment has resulted in great results. Other than cutting down a lot of them, the government there has displaced them to another location.
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 action has resulted in an increase in wildlife as well at the same has helped them to retain their forest cover.
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, it is very evident that tourism has indeed resulted in many ecological problems in many parts of the world. But the steps taken by the respective governments to address
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 problem are not all adequate. There are more actions needed like spreading awareness
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 to placing strict controls and regulations
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