The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The given pie charts represent information about different age groups

such

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as 0-14

years

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, 15-59

years

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, and above 60

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of 2

country

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Yemen

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and Italy, in 2000 and projections for 2050.

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, the elderly

population

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would be increased in 2050 in both countries,

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the 0

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-14

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group would be decreased in 2050, especially

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since the

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population

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drop in

Yemen

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is remarkable. First and foremost,

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in Yemen's

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Yemen's

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Yemen

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almost half of

citizens

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were 0-14

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old

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to Italy's 14.3% of

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population

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the population

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. Nearly

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of people was above 60

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old in Italy, in 2000.

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ratio

significantly

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higher than

Yemen

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's elder people

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3.6%.

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, both countries' middle age groups were above %45 and for Italy

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ratio even higher than %60.

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, in 2050 Italy's middle age group

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among

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population

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the population

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would be estimated %

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, 50

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later

Yemen

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's 15-59

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old

population

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ratio would be increased

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11%. For

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generation

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population

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ratios would be estimated %

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and %11.5 for

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and Italy respectively.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".

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Vocabulary: Replace the words years, yemen, population with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 4 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.

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6
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
3
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
18
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

166 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

population distribution
age group
population pyramid
projections
young population
aging population
demographic shift
increase in elderly population
proportion
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population dynamics
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balanced age distribution
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The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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In many countries governments are investing in new technology to dealt with the public. Why is this happening? Do you think this is an appropriate use of government money?

Some people believe that a good teacher is more important for education success while others think the students attitude is more important to succeed in education. Discuss both views, and give your own opinion.

Difference between countries are becoming less evident. Nowadays, people are watching the same films, fashion, brands, advertisement and TV channels. To what extent do the disadvantages of this outweigh the advantages?