The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The given pie charts represent information about different age groups
such
as 0-14 years
, 15-59 years
, and above 60 years
of 2 country
, Change to a plural noun
countries
Yemen
and Italy, in 2000 and projections for 2050.
Overall
, the elderly population
would be increased in 2050 in both countries, however
, 0
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the 0
years
group would be decreased in 2050, especially the
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since the
population
drop in Yemen
is remarkable.
First and foremost, Change preposition
in Yemen's
Yemen's
almost half of Change noun form
Yemen
citizens
were 0-14 Correct article usage
the citizens
years
old compare
to Italy's 14.3% of Wrong verb form
compared
population
. Nearly Add an article
the population
quarter
of people was above 60 Correct article usage
a quarter
years
old in Italy, in 2000. This
ratio significantly
higher than Add a missing verb
is significantly
Yemen
's elder people as
3.6%. Change preposition
at
Moreover
, both countries' middle age groups were above %45 and for Italy this
ratio even higher than %60. In contrast
, in 2050 Italy's middle age group percentages
among Fix the agreement mistake
percentage
population
would be estimated %Add an article
the population
46.2
. Change preposition
at 46.2
However
, 50 years
later Yemen
's 15-59 years
old population
ratio would be increased approximately
11%. For Change preposition
by approximately
younger
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the younger
generation
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,generation
population
ratios would be estimated %37
and %11.5 for Change preposition
at 37
Yemen
and Italy respectively.Submitted by historicalpen on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words years, yemen, population with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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