QUESTIONS: WITH A FAST PACE OF MODERN LIFE MORE AND MORE PEOPLE ARE TURNING TOWARDS FASTFOOD FOR THEIR MAIN MEALS. DO YOU THINK ADVANTAGES OUTWEIGH THE ADVANTAGES?
In modern life, almost everyone
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lives
live
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lives
in
a fast pace and there are Change preposition
at
increasing
number of individuals Correct article usage
an increasing
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who trend
trend
to rely on the Correct your spelling
tend
fastfood
for their main Correct your spelling
fast food
fast-food
meals
. There are some benefits of
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to
this
approach, however
, I believe the disadvantages outweigh the advantages.
On the one hand, no on
could deny that Correct your spelling
one
the
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apply
fastfood
changes Correct your spelling
fast food
fast-food
people
life in a positive way to some Change noun form
people's
extents
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extent
Firstly
, people in modern life always have a tight schedule which doesn't allow them to cook for themselves or spend to
much time in the Correct your spelling
too
resturant
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restaurant
in
weekdays. Change preposition
on
Fastfood
is absolutely Correct your spelling
Fast food
convienent
for them to have a meal quickly. In Correct your spelling
convenient
this
way, they could keep on focusing their
work Change preposition
on their
instead
of distracting by wondering how to eat. Moreover
, thanks to the well developed
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well-developed
fastfood
industry, there Correct your spelling
fast food
fast-food
are
a variety of Change the verb form
is
fastfood
for Correct your spelling
fast foods
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the customer
a customer
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customers
.
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from.
For instance
, Chinese food, Japanese cuisine, western hamburger etc. It is easy for individuals to try somethings
new and explore different Fix the agreement mistake
something
cultrues
.
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cultures
However
, though fastfood
has some benefits, it is evident that the disadvantages overweigh the advantages. First of all, countless Correct your spelling
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researches
have been conducted Change the wording
types of research
pieces of research
kinds of research
through
the world that reveal Change preposition
throughout
fastfood
is unhealthy. Correct your spelling
fast food
Although
you could save some time, it is not a
approachable way to treat yourself better. Change the article
an
Furthermore
, by having fastfoof
in main Correct your spelling
fast food
meals
, individuals are inevitable
to lost chance to spend time with their family. Change the word
inevitably
For example
, when cooking meals
at home, you could naturaly
communicate and accompany Correct your spelling
naturally
with
your family. Change preposition
apply
Fastfood
deprives Correct your spelling
Fast food
this
opportunity from
you. Change the preposition
of
Lastly
, once someone render
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renders
fastfood
as their formal Correct your spelling
fast food
fast-food
meals
, they will become independent in the end Fix the agreement mistake
meal
due to
lack
of ability in cooking for themselves.
In conclusion, the disadvantages of Correct article usage
a lack
fastfood
outweigh Correct your spelling
fast food
thr
advantages. It is feasible for people to have Correct your spelling
the
fastfood
sometimes, but they are not supposed to Correct your spelling
fast food
fast-food
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be dependent
dependent
on it because of the Replace the word
depend
convience
.Correct your spelling
convenience
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