QUESTIONS: WITH A FAST PACE OF MODERN LIFE MORE AND MORE PEOPLE ARE TURNING TOWARDS FASTFOOD FOR THEIR MAIN MEALS. DO YOU THINK ADVANTAGES OUTWEIGH THE ADVANTAGES?

In modern life, almost everyone
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live
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in
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a fast pace and there are
increasing
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an increasing
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number of individuals
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who trend
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trend
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tend
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to rely on the
fastfood
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fast food
fast-food
for their main
meals
. There are some benefits
of
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this
approach,
however
, I believe the disadvantages outweigh the advantages. On the one hand, no
on
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could deny that
the
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fastfood
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fast food
fast-food
changes
people
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people's
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life in a positive way to some
extents
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.
Firstly
, people in modern life always have a tight schedule which doesn't allow them to cook for themselves or spend
to
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much time in the
resturant
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restaurant
in
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weekdays.
Fastfood
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is absolutely
convienent
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convenient
for them to have a meal quickly. In
this
way, they could keep on focusing
their
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work
instead
of distracting by wondering how to eat.
Moreover
, thanks to the
well developed
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fastfood
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fast food
fast-food
industry, there
are
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a variety of
fastfood
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fast foods
for
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the customer
a customer
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customer
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customers
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to select
.
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from.
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For instance
, Chinese food, Japanese cuisine, western hamburger etc. It is easy for individuals to try
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something
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new and explore different
cultrues
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cultures
.
However
, though
fastfood
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fast food
fast-food
has some benefits, it is evident that the disadvantages overweigh the advantages. First of all, countless
researches
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have been conducted
through
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the world that reveal
fastfood
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fast food
is unhealthy.
Although
you could save some time, it is not
a
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approachable way to treat yourself better.
Furthermore
, by having
fastfoof
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fast food
in main
meals
, individuals are
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to lost chance to spend time with their family.
For example
, when cooking
meals
at home, you could
naturaly
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naturally
communicate and accompany
with
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your family.
Fastfood
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deprives
this
opportunity
from
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of
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you.
Lastly
, once someone
render
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fastfood
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fast food
fast-food
as their formal
meals
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meal
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, they will become independent in the end
due to
lack
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a lack
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of ability in cooking for themselves. In conclusion, the disadvantages of
fastfood
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fast food
outweigh
thr
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the
advantages. It is feasible for people to have
fastfood
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fast food
fast-food
sometimes, but they are not supposed to
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dependent
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depend
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on it because of the
convience
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convenience
.
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