Parents should spend more time with their children helping them with their homework. Do you agree or disagree?

Children often
time
needs help with their assignments and
parents
should allot
time
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assisting them. I agree with
this
notion, as I believe
this
is a good venue to establish
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parent
-
child
relationship
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and an opportunity to assess their
child
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educational growth. I would argue that when a
parent
give
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quality
time
to their
child
especially
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with their
homeworks
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homework
it does not limit
on
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teaching, but building a strong
parent
-
child
relationship. Children at
this
stage will feel valued knowing that their
parents
are the
one
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helping them,
thus
increased
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their
enthusiam
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enthusiasm
to learn and be
confidant
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to
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them
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. A comparison with a hands-on
parent
and working
parents
,
for example
, a
child
with
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parent
,
have
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a low performance at school and
distant
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,
while
with
parents
around
them
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they perform well at school and have a good relationship towards each other. On one hand, once a
parent
help
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their young
ones'
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ones
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with their
assigment
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assignment
they can assess their learning growth.
This
way they can measure their
childs'
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progress at school and how they can provide assistance
on
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their learning.
This
give
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a chance to
parents
to co-teach their
yougster
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youngsters
at home, for
intance
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instance
, in
role playing
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by teaching them identification of words and mathematics with the use of flash cards. In
this
, the
child
learns
while
playing with their closest person. In conclusion, I would argue that
by
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helping their
childs'
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homework it promotes
strong
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bond between
parent
and
child
at
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while at
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the same
time
assessing their
child
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educational growth. Not only that children will feel valued and be
confidant
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with their
parents
thus
benefits
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child
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success
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in their future studies.
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  • parental involvement
  • academic development
  • parent-child relationship
  • supported and encouraged
  • confidence and independence
  • educational strategies
  • autonomous learning
  • foster a love for learning
  • tailored interventions
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