Cyclists and car drivers sharing the same road might cause some problems. What could be done to solve those problems?

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from using the same

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cyclist

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and private car

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are a hot controversial topic. The most significant drawbacks are causing

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and accidents.

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essay will discuss those problems and some

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will be recommended to reduce them.

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issue is that if many

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move on only one

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cause

traffic

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is primarily because of the fact that when a two-wheel mean owner

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the street without signal lights, it may cause difficulties for

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dangerous for

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if they do not pay attention to other

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crossing

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, there was a

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accident between a

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truck and a cycle which took away

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man's life. Some possible solutions which can be carried out to mitigate

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problems are regulating some laws and legislations and building more public facilities. Officials should bring about strict regulations and principles for all private

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owners when they participate in traffic.

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, Authorities should encourage dwellers

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public

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of means on

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, governments should lay out plans which

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with facilities constructing

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as bridges,

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roads and tunnels which may help to ease the number of vehicles concentrated on

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. In conclusion,

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vecicles

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vesicles

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can benefit in many aspects, but problematic matters

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connected with them

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becoming more and more serious.

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essay clearly presents not only severe issues like congestion and

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exonerating

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but

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suggests states have to introduce proper resorts to ease

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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4 paragraphs

277 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

traffic congestion
urban areas
road space
accidents
safety concerns
differences in speed and size
vulnerable
severe injuries
road rage
frustration
aggressive behavior
infrastructure
road design
unsafe conditions
environmental impact
emissions
environmental degradation

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