the piw charts below show the comparion of different kinds of energy production of France in two years
the pie charts demonstrate five different kinds of fossil fuel in France in the
years
1995 and 2005.
overall
, Gas, Coal and petrol were the biggest market share in both years
which count over half of the production
of energy, at the same time nuclear and other kinds of production
were followed by a small percentage over the last
10 years
period. In all types of production
, there was a small minimal change in 10 years
.
The highest consumer by energy production
in the year 1995 was Coal with nearly 29.80 per cent and it showed in 2005 a very steadily increased 1% a mere 30.93. although
Gas was found at 29.63 in 1995 and It also
showed the same growth up to 30.31 % in the next 10 years
.
Regards the other energy production
showed a growth of production
of approximately 5 % in both nuclear power and other sources to 10.10 and 9.10 respectively. On the other hand
, petrol was the only source which decreased Dramatically from 29.27 in 1995 to around fifty (19.55) in 2005.Submitted by hkhan8597 on
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