The diagram below shows the steps of processing cocoa beans

The diagram below shows the steps of processing cocoa beans
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The given diagram illustrates how
cocoa
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bean products are created. In general, in order to produce final products, the
beans
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have to undergo three steps which are picking and drying, pressing and refining, and
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processing before being ready for mass consumption. The whole
cocoa
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beans
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are first picked from the field, followed by a process of splitting shells and drying. The dried
beans
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are
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moved to the next stage where they are pressed into
cocoa
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liquor. From here, there are two different processes of
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pressing and
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refining which result in diverse outputs for particular usage. To be more specific, the
beans
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that experience more press create
cocoa
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for the cakes and drink industry and
cocoa
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cake for
cocoa
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powder making.
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, to create
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powder for consumers, the
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cake still has to take another grinding process.
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,
cocoa
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liquor after being refined forms industrial chocolate.
This
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product is mixed with more
cocoa
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and sugar and
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further
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processed into finished chocolate products that can be sold for consumption.
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