The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The maps depict Greymouth
village
, developed from the year 1995 to the present. Overall
, we can see that a traditional village
has been converted into a city by establishing major changes around the village
. The cafe, built in the southeast, is the one which has not been changed.
Focusing on 1995, there was a main road
, which separates the sea and the village
. And it had shops and fish markets in the southwest on either side of the road
. The fishing port can be seen on the sea, which is situated south of the town. The main road
is extended along the northwest region with small houses constructed on both sides toward the corner. Coming to the northeast side, the farmland accompanied by a forest park is indeed a beautiful sight. The hotel and cafe are located in the southeast part of the village
.
As of now, focusing on the present image of the map, there are considerable changes to be noticed. Firstly
, shops and fish markets on the sides of the main road
have been replaced by restaurants and apartments respectively. Secondly
,the farmland and the forest park are linked and converted into courts for the games, Golf and Tennis. Thirdly
, With a large space near the hotel, a car parking lot has been built right next to it. The fishing port, which was situated in the south of the sea, has been removed now. Finally
, the main road
has been extended towards the northwest side near the housing area, where two new houses are newly built. The cafe is the only one which remained in the same area all these years without any changes.Submitted by yashwanth1plus on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words village, road with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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