The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Newport city center from 2003-2012.

The line graph gives information about the changes in three various areas of crime, burglaries, car thefts and robberies, in Newport city centre, close to a decade between 2003 and 2012. In general, what could be highlighted from the chart is that the number of crime incidents in the inner city decreased remarkably. Another interesting point is that the

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of robberies,

thefts

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and thefts

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from the person, remained stable during the observed period. Looking at the details, as regards burglaries, it started at less than 3500 incidents in 2003, reached a peak in 2004 and

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experienced a gradual drop during the remaining period. Concerning car thefts,

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2800 occasions, fell slightly in 2006 and

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soared to 2700

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2012.

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, the number of robberies remained constant during the given period. Despite being stable all the observed time, it experienced a slight reduction in 2008 and

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grew up slowly.