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The diagram below shows the stages and equipment used in the process of making matches. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The diagram below shows the stages and equipment used in the process of making matches. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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introduction: We are now explaining the method that leads to the fabrication matches, analysing every tool and chemical substance through all the passages.
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 process starts with a log peeled in veneers by a blade.
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 every stripes are gather together in file and chopped by a chopper in little pieces that are poured in an ammonium phosphate tank and
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 dryed in a round dryer. These fragments are now in an hopper that leads them to a storage
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 thanks to a blower. Ones in the storage
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 the matches fall on to a roal and
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 in a tube, which ends as an inserter that can do the insertion of the pieces in a mechanism that leads to an
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 characterised by tree tanks containing respectively : paraffin wax; based chemicals and tip chemicals.
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 all these fragments pass through a linked drying
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 and afterward fall into the packaging
area
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Change the first paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words area with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 1 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the first paragraph.
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