The charts below show the results of a survey on happiness ratings for married and unmarried people in the US, and the effect of children on the overall ratings of married couples. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the results of a survey on happiness ratings for married and unmarried people in the US, and the effect of children on the overall ratings of married couples.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar
chart
shows the percentage of
people
who are happy in the United States. The first one divides
people
into age
groups
and marital status. The second
chart
demonstrates how
children
impact the rating of happiness in married couples.
According to
the first
chart
, the amount of enjoyment in married
groups
fluctuates between 40 and 45 per
cent
. The 18-29, 30-49 and 65 and over
years
old
groups
have the most significant percentage of happiness which is between 44 and 45 per
cent
.
While
the first three
groups
of unmarried
people
have the lowest statistic in the range of 21 and 22 per
cent
.
Although
, the
last
unmarried group of
people
which is 65 and over
years
old has a compelling difference of 12 per
cent
approximately from previous
groups
. The second bar
chart
demonstrates the rating of happiness in married couples with
children
. The happiest group is represented by
people
who have
children
under 18
years
old with 44 per
cent
. Other
groups
have a similar percentage.
People
with only one child over 18
years
old have 41 per
cent
, and the group of couples with no
children
has 43 per
cent
.
Overall
, we can clearly see that married
people
are happier than unmarried with regard to the fact whether they have
children
or not.
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