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You are going away to travel for the summer. A friend will be looking after your house while you are away. Write a letter your friend. In your letter: Say where you are going Describe your house Explain some of the things your friend must do to look after your house •You should write at least 150 words. •You do NOT need to write your own address.

#you #travel #summer #friend #house #say #describe #explain #•you #address
Dear John, I am writing
this
 letter to let you know about my upcoming trip and my house particulars.
Firstly
, as you know, we are going on vacation to attend my younger brother's wedding.
Hence
, you have to look after my house when we are out of town.
Secondly
, Let me tell you a few details about my beautiful new mansion. It is a three-bedroom individual house located near the lakeshore. It has a fabulous view from the main hall.
Moreover
, you can enjoy your free time in the home theatre. I will arrange all the necessary food items for your stay. I will text you the address and lock code to enter the building.
Last
 but not the least, Let me highlight important things that you must look after.
First,
Please do not forget to pour water into the plants in the backyard.
Second,
Please clear the snow on the walkway.
Last
, Please make sure to lock the main door before going to bed. Look forward to hearing from you soon. Warm regards Janardhan
Submitted by janardhan.gangineni on

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