The graph below compares changes in the birth rates of China and the USA between 1920 and 2000

The graph below compares changes in the birth rates of China and the USA between 1920 and 2000
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The line graph display compares the percentage of
birth
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rate
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in two countries over the period of 80 years. From the
overall
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,perspective it is obvious that
while
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birth
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rates in nations followed a similar trajectory, and fell over the period
China
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's reduction was the most dramatic, and the
birth
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rate
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in the USA was higher in the first half of the century. In 1920, the
birth
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rate
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in the US stand around 11%, 1% higher than that of
China
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. Around 1930 when there was a surge in
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and unexpectedly over the next 15 years the
birth
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rate
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dropped falling to 5% per cent in
China
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, and 6% in the USA. The
birth
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rate
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in
China
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quadrupled over the next few years to a high of 20%, which preceded a steady downturn with minor fluctuations at around 2% to the end of the period surveyed.
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,
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rates in the US rise, less significantly to approximately 14%, and
thereafter
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experienced a more gradual slump to finish at 7% in 2000.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words birth, rate, china with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • birth rate
  • demographics
  • population control policy
  • One-Child Policy
  • Baby Boom
  • fertility rate
  • census data
  • fluctuations
  • societal norms
  • economic prosperity
  • Great Leap Forward
  • family planning
  • contraception
  • workforce participation
  • aging population
  • urbanization
  • trend analysis
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