The graph below compares changes in the birth rates of China and the USA between 1920 and 2000
The line graph display compares the percentage of
birth
rate
in two countries over the period of 80 years. From the overall
,perspective it is obvious that while
birth
rates in nations followed a similar trajectory, and fell over the period China
's reduction was the most dramatic, and the birth
rate
in the USA was higher in the first half of the century.
In 1920, the birth
rate
in the US stand around 11%, 1% higher than that of China
. Around 1930 when there was a surge in China
and unexpectedly over the next 15 years the birth
rate
dropped falling to 5% per cent in China
, and 6% in the USA.
The birth
rate
in China
quadrupled over the next few years to a high of 20%, which preceded a steady downturn with minor fluctuations at around 2% to the end of the period surveyed. Similarly
, birth
rates in the US rise, less significantly to approximately 14%, and thereafter
experienced a more gradual slump to finish at 7% in 2000.Submitted by chartakinnovation on
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