Due to poorer countries experiencing a brain drain they are seeing many professionals, such as doctors and teachers leaving to work in more developing countries. What problem does this cause? What solutions can be suggested to deal with this solution?

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It is undisputable fact that a number of
profissionals
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professionals
such
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as
doctors
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and teachers tend to go
another
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country
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in order to get opportunities and earn more money that they could not make money in their own
country
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because of poor operations of the
government
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. It can be
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the cause
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cause
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of being brain drain. It means the community might be faced with
multitude
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a multitude
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of issues in
their
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future.
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, we are growing up, most of us dream of having a family and
new
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a new
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comfortable residence,
that is
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why a lot of individuals have been going
to
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overseas in order to work because they are not satisfied with these opportunities in their own
country
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.
For example
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,
doctors
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should be taught about 7 years.
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this
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reason, they
maight
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might
desire to work with enough convenience
such
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as their own room, own business.
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, the
government
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could not support them with
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kind of
facilities
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.
Furthermore
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, there are certain solutions for
this
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issue to
inhance
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enhance
the
government
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of the
country
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as well as
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to save
profissionals
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professionals
of the population.
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this
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, the
government
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had better
to
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pay attention to
develop
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developing
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their culture by
envesting
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investing
money
for
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in
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their employers. Not only they should care for education but
also
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they
shoud
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should
be
sereous
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serious
for
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about
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th
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the
teacher's
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teachers'
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salary
as well as
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the treatment
alsa
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also
require care for the best
medicine
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service.
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, when someone needs
an
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emergency help
then
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they are not able to be gone to
hospital
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the hospital
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because of
long
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the long
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distance.
Hence
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, there should be
multitude
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a multitude
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of educated people
such
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as
doctors
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.
To conclude
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, the number of professionalized people in
third world
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countries is decreasing, resulting in
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an issue
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issue
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issues
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like the unavailability of
doctors
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and skilled workers in some areas.
However
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, the
government
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and organizations have a role to play by investing in education and salaries
to
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for
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their citizens
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