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Currently, there is a trend toward alternative forms of medicine. However, at bests these methods are ineffective, and at worst, they may be dangerous. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

#trend #alternative #forms #medicine #bests #methods
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, there is a trend toward
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forms
 of
medicine
.
However
,at best these methods are ineffective,and at worst,they may be dangerous.In
older
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order
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 to explain why I
portly
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partly
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 agree with the opinion
this
 essay will explain the benefit of
alternative
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forms
 of
medicine
 and
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mesits
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merits
 of
this
 statement. On the one hand,there are several
disagree
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of
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this
 statement.
Firstly
,it is dangerous because
alternetive
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alternative forms
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 of medical not
success
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parsentage
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percentage
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 is higher than of medical care.
Also
,
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 patients feel uneasy because
doctor
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doctors
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 do not
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have procedure
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procedure
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procedures
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 so patients
worried
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 about whether the disease will be cured.
On the other hand
,there are
sseveral
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several
 advantages of
alternative
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forms
 of
medicine
. The most
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main
 reason is that can help underdeveloped
countries
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 patients.The
alternative
froms
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forms
 of
medicine
 can be done
whitout
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without
 medical machines.So,if there are
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no
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a hospital
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hospital
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hospitals
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 or medical machines,
people
 can help
by
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alternative
froms
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forms
 of
medicine
.What is more,it is often said that
streas
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stress
 is
very
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 bad effect
to
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on
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ill
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the ill
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.Some
people
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feel
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streast
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stressed
 when
go
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 to the hospital.So
lessing
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streats
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streets
treats
 by
usingalternative
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using alternative
froms
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forms
 of
medicine
.
Secondly
,
alternative
froms
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forms
 of
medicine
is
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 kind
for
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 our body.So less burden on the body.
In addition
,
alternative
froms
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forms
 of
medicine
 do not have to go to
hospital
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the hospital
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 so good for
people
 who can not go to
hospital
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the hospital
a hospital
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 for work or other reasons. In conclusion,in my
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is
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that
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sslightly
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slightly
 agree with the
alternative
froms
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forms
 of
medicine
 because a lot of
people
 can help by
alternative
froms
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forms
 of
medicine
. Especially,undeveloped countries.I think that in the
futer
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future
 more and more a trend toward
alternative
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forms
 of
medicine
than
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that
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 more and more
people
 help by
alternative
froms
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forms
 of
medicine
.
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