Some people think that governments should ban dangerous sports, while others think people should have freedom to do any sports or activity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

There is no doubt that governments have a major role

toward

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the

sports

field.

For

this

reason, some people think that governments should prevent people from playing dangerous

sports

,

while

others think that it is the individuals' responsibility to take

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their freedom to do any sport. I believe that the government should create barriers to

the

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sports

that may put someone's life in danger. First of all, many

sports

which are done internationally are super dangerous for athletes as they put their life at risk.

In addition

, at the present time, new

sports

are discovered that are considered a threat

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many peoples' lives.

Moreover

, it is equally important to have the experience and skills needed to play a specific sport.

For example

,

sports

relating to the sea or using sharp

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.

However

, it is important to realize that several methods are created to protect athletes' life using safe kits that can help during

doing

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any activity.

Additionally

,

proofs

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should be given that prove the safety of

sports

to reduce the percentage of accidents and injuries.

To sum up

, insurance of safety must be taken into account during conducting

sports

or any other activity. As a matter of fact, it is well known that it is the citizens' freedom to play the

sports

they like. In my opinion, the government has a role that should be applied to protect the generations of the future. In my opinion,