Some people think that children should be taught to competitive in school. Others however, think cooperation and team working skills are more important. Discuss both views/sides/points.

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education
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vital in the future so many parents want to their children learn knowledge at
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university. Many people often said that students ought to learn
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in
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. But the next groups of humans, illustrate
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opinion
is co-operation and together working practices are significant. That tendency has a number of benefits and
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problems.
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essay will discuss both views
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views in support of the latter. On the one hand, the
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2000 years
also
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force curriculum programs.
Moreover
, Europe,
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and
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countries have more practices in that field. Especially,
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Japan state set up
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educational
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at schools so a lot of countries quote these situations
such
as Azerbaijan and Georgia.
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decade that tendency became useful things for
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population
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.
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last
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gradual increase and reached a peak
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rate was 97%. That high rate of quantity because Azerbaijan habitants
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ten
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.
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there are some drawbacks
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the reason many students
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fields.
On the other hand
, currently time the studying development is unsatisfying for some parents, for the reason the
school
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work
life. Obviously, those humans
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cooperation
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and
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work
because
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work
and others provide some skills. Indeed, particularly
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some skill
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more
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that the
school
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employeers
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employers
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article
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journal ,
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''Special Practise'.
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growth so
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condition wants some special knowledge
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as team
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work
practise, agile management and social
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. In conclusion, there
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some general
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so each group has a few
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and some
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. The essay is discussed
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view and
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many
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aspects.
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a
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next decade the government must
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diffusion
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educational system.
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