In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, some countries have
driverless
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a driverless
the driverless
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taxi
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taxis
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,
bus
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and bus
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drivers
, who were being replaced
to
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driver bots.
May be
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, for some of
group
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the group
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people
it would be a good idea,
for
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not
be
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kidnapped and some kind of
these crime
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.
However
, there always be some
of
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groups
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the groups
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who
disagrees
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.
To begin
with talking about the advantages, as I said with the driver bots or it will be more
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to say
autopilots
,
people
will feel
themselves
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more comfortable and more protected.
For instance
, we all shave that some taxi
drivers
or bus
drivers
are able to do
such
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moves as
to
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drive
out
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the road. So,
i
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think
autopilots
would be reliable at the moment.
In addition
, we don'
t
have
guarantee
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a guarantee
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that our driver isn'
t
drunK
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drunk
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. So, that's another to not believe the
drivers
.
On the other hand
, the other group of
people
don'
t
want to believe
autopilots
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. I
agvee
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agree
with them too.
Firstly
, passengers don'
t
want to give their life to
autopilots
. Because
this
is a robot, Which can give
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error
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errors
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at any time and we all expect what incidents could be,
such
as car crashing, locking doors and e.
t
.c.
Secondly
,
people
wants
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to believe
to
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in
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an experts
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experts
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and have
some
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good conversation with
him
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them
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. Because,
people
are sociable
creatuve
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creative
creatures
creature
, and they need to communicate. In conclusion, I think advantages
over
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apply
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.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • driverless vehicles
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • increased safety
  • reduced traffic congestion
  • improved efficiency
  • accessibility
  • disabled
  • elderly
  • job displacement
  • privacy concerns
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