The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001.
The charts show how much a UK school spent on different running costs in three separate years 1981, 1991 and 2001.
Overall
Linking Words
teacher's
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teachers'
salaries
consulted the largest Use synonyms
cost
to the school, and Use synonyms
while
spending increased dramatically Linking Words
for
equipment and insurance, there were corresponding drops in expenditure on things Change preposition
on
such
as books and on other workers' Linking Words
salaries
.
In all three years, the greatest expenditure was on staff Use synonyms
salaries
. But Use synonyms
while
other workers’ Linking Words
salaries
saw a fall from 28% in 1981 to only 15% of spending in 2001, teachers’ pay remained the biggest Use synonyms
cost
reaching 50% of total spending in 1991 and ending at 45% in 2001.
Expenditures on resources and furniture and equipment were similar at 15% in 1981. The spending Use synonyms
for
resources had increased to 20% by 1991 before decreasing to only 9% by the end of the period. Change preposition
on
In contrast
, the Linking Words
cost
of Use synonyms
the
furniture and equipment saw an opposite trend. Correct article usage
apply
This
Linking Words
cost
decreased to only 5% of total expenditure in 1991 but rose dramatically in 2001 when it represented 23% of the school budget. Use synonyms
Similarly
, the Linking Words
cost
of insurance saw a rising trend, growing from only 2% to 8% by 2001.Use synonyms
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