In the past many people had skills such as making their own clothes and doing repairs to things in the house. In many countries, nowadays, skills like these are disappearing. Why do you think this change is happening? How far is this situation true in your country?

The skills start to disappear since
people
do not have
time
and do not want to learn about them.
Time
is essential, and
people
prefer to spend their
time
with their jobs rather than make something that they can buy easily in offline or online
stores
. So many years ago, life is simple. Parents pass the skill to their children, but now the children choose not to be like their parents. They decide what they want and think that making something is not cool and wasting
time
. Nowadays, we can see many developments everywhere in any sector, including the retail and
furniture
industries. Everything we need is just at our fingertips. Many
stores
provide cute dresses, pants, skirts, and even socks that you can find everywhere and anytime. The
stores
have everything you need. You do not need to think get the materials and how long you need to make it.
In my
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grandparent's
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era, I still remember that they make everything by themselves. They use their basic knowledge to make everything they need,
such
as traditional
clothes
and
furniture
(desk, bench and cupboard) in their home with wood from the forest and they choose the best materials for it. The new generation needs everything in a simple way; rather than make their own
clothes
and
furniture
, they prefer to buy them in the offline or online store. It will take a moment
than
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you make it by yourself. Even young
people
do not know how to make a simple stitch. Buy
clothes
and
furniture
in the
stores
is cheaper than you make by yourself. The influencers and advertisements suggest you buy so many kinds of
clothes
or
furniture
they say about many advantages and how cool you are, we can say now as fast fashion and
people
tempted to buy any styles to fit with their occasions because it is simple and Cheaper.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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