The table and chart show data about reading among people under 30 years old.

The table and chart show data about reading among people under 30 years old.
The bar chart reveals the separate proportion of
three
types
books
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that people under 30 years old read. The table indicates the rate of reading a book and the number of average
books
among
three
different age groups.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the least percentage covered in the audiobook,
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whereas
wheres
, in print
books
, the figures were at their peak with regards to
three
ages. It
also
can be seen that reading a book was the most favourable choice of
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-17-year-old generation
in contrast
to the age from 18 to 24,
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the minimum option. Looking at the first graph in more detail, the proportion of reading printed version
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the highest among
three
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the three
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ages, at over 80%, approximately 72% and above 70% respectively, which were higher than
other
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two types, approximately four times as high as the rate. Turning to the second graph, 90% of
16
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the 16
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-17-year-old bracket stood at the peak with
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average
12
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books
.
However
, the group of 18-
24-year-old
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24-year-olds
and 25-29-year-old shared a similar trend of reading, at 79% and 81%
saparately
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separately
, with 11
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