Who has a larger influence on children- parents, teachers, or their peers?

Children
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in the present generation are widely open to their surrounding unlike before,
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it brings us to the question of who is their biggest influencer, is it the
parents
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, the teachers or their
friends
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? I would argue that the
parents
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have the most
influence
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over the
child
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's growth and development because of the fact that they are under one roof, and at a young age, their
parents
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are in charge of their life until they have a mind of their own. School-age
children
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,
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, are not capable to make decisions and choices, everything relies upon their mother's approval. On one hand, I acknowledge the contribution of teachers to
children
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's academic learning. Their influences greatly contribute to the
child
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's future success in pursuing
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education.
On the other hand
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, the impact of
friends
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on the
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's life is undeniably helpful but at the same time frustrating. The larger the community the
child
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belongs to in their crowd, the
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of how the
child
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acts often has a negative impact, if not guided well. Youngsters, as we know it, easily get enticed by poor choices in life because of their immaturity which resulted in early pregnancy, alcoholism and drugs at an early age.
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, there are some
friends
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to be praised for their positive
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, my nephew,
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, encouraged and joined him in their study group attributed to his good marks at school. In conclusion,I would argue that the
parents
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have the most
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over their
children
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's lives,
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I acknowledge the merits of teachers at school, and the positive
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of
friends
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. Albeit,
children
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need continuous guidance and assistance throughout their growth and development because there is still a huge possibility they will cross wrong paths.

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