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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people traveling inside this vehicle will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

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Some years later we find that our
cars
 and
buses
 will
drive
 by themselves so we can do our other work when the car is driving. It has
a
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some
benefits
 and worse effects in our life
that
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I believe the
benefits
 of
this
 have higher weight than
bad
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the bad
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 effects. On the one hand, today many nations doing their work with machines and
robots
 So it is natural that in the future
cars
 and Bus
drivers
 will be unusable.
Although
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, it has some
benefits
 that I want to explain
about
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it
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.
Firstly
 , the intelligent
drive
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driver
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 may be safer
from
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drivers
 derived for ,
example
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 the intelligent
drive
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driver
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 can not take risks in emergency situations but man
drivers
 may take dangerous decisions.
Secondly
, automatic driving would be on time and passengers
can
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 take
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plane
with
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their
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times
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.
Finally
, today 's world technology is growing
up
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quickly and people can not
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 it, and they should accept it.
However
, they don't like
this
 difference. Today many systems are
controlling
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 by
robots
, and they can do their jobs very well
also
 it has good economic advantages.
On the other hand
 , when
cars
 and
buses
 can
drive
 by themselves or by
robots
 many
drivers
lost
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 their jobs, and they can't earn money from driving so it has some disadvantages.
Also
 , when
buses
 can
drive
 by themselves they need an electrician who can repair
that new systems
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 and find it so hard.
In addition
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it is hard for people to trust the
buses
 and
cars
 that have no driver. In conclusion, there is a period of time in history that
buses
 and
cars
 have
not
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drivers
, and they
drive
 by themselves and
robots
. It has some
benefits
 and disadvantages for people. I personally argue that
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benefits
of
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it
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have a higher weight than
its
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disadvantages and I explain
that
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those
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 two
argues
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.
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