In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people traveling inside this vehicle will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

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Some years later we find that our
cars
and
buses
will
drive
by themselves so we can do our other work when the car is driving. It has
a
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some
benefits
and worse effects in our life
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I believe the
benefits
of
this
have higher weight than
bad
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the bad
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effects. On the one hand, today many nations doing their work with machines and
robots
So it is natural that in the future
cars
and Bus
drivers
will be unusable.
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, it has some
benefits
that I want to explain
about
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it
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.
Firstly
, the intelligent
drive
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may be safer
from
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drivers
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example
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the intelligent
drive
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can not take risks in emergency situations but man
drivers
may take dangerous decisions.
Secondly
, automatic driving would be on time and passengers
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take
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plane
with
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their
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times
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Finally
, today 's world technology is growing
up
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quickly and people can not
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it, and they should accept it.
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, they don't like
this
difference. Today many systems are
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by
robots
, and they can do their jobs very well
also
it has good economic advantages.
On the other hand
, when
cars
and
buses
can
drive
by themselves or by
robots
many
drivers
lost
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their jobs, and they can't earn money from driving so it has some disadvantages.
Also
, when
buses
can
drive
by themselves they need an electrician who can repair
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and find it so hard.
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it is hard for people to trust the
buses
and
cars
that have no driver. In conclusion, there is a period of time in history that
buses
and
cars
have
not
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drivers
, and they
drive
by themselves and
robots
. It has some
benefits
and disadvantages for people. I personally argue that
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benefits
of
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it
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have a higher weight than
its
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disadvantages and I explain
that
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those
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argues
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.
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