In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people traveling inside this vehicle will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

Some years later we find that our

cars

and

buses

will

drive

by themselves so we can do our other work when the car is driving. It has

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some

benefits

and worse effects in our life

that

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I believe the

benefits

of

this

have higher weight than

bad

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effects. On the one hand, today many nations doing their work with machines and

robots

So it is natural that in the future

cars

and Bus

drivers

will be unusable.

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, it has some

benefits

that I want to explain

about

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it

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.

Firstly

, the intelligent

drive

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may be safer

from

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drivers

derived for ,

example

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the intelligent

drive

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can not take risks in emergency situations but man

drivers

may take dangerous decisions.

Secondly

, automatic driving would be on time and passengers

can

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take

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plane

with

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their

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times

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Finally

, today 's world technology is growing

up

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quickly and people can not

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it, and they should accept it.

However

, they don't like

this

difference. Today many systems are

controlling

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by

robots

, and they can do their jobs very well

also

it has good economic advantages.

On the other hand

, when

cars

and

buses

can

drive

by themselves or by

robots

many

drivers

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their jobs, and they can't earn money from driving so it has some disadvantages.

Also

, when

buses

can

drive

by themselves they need an electrician who can repair

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and find it so hard.

In addition

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it is hard for people to trust the

buses

and

cars

that have no driver. In conclusion, there is a period of time in history that

buses

and

cars

have

not

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drivers

, and they

drive

by themselves and

robots

. It has some

benefits

and disadvantages for people. I personally argue that

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benefits

of

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it

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have a higher weight than

its

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disadvantages and I explain

that

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two

argues

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.