Your local council has advertised for volunteers to teach on a basic English programme for refugees. You would like to do some work for this programme in your free time. Write a letter to the programme coordinator. In your letter • explain why you would like to do unpaid work on this programme • describe why you are a suitable candidate • say when you are available to teach.
Dear Sir,
I am Harvey,
leaving
at flat 1, 539, Forest Road, Canterbury 2036. I am writing to you with regard to the advertisement in "The Times" for a volunteer English teacher.
First of all, I am a student at Hallam University. I saw an advertisement on 27 Verb problem
living
march
about volunteering work and I am interested Capitalize word
March
to teach
English program to refugees because Change preposition
in teaching
this
not only boosts my CV but also
improves my confidence level.
Moving on, I found myself a suitable person to teach according to
the advertisement because I also
attend
two seminars Wrong verb form
attended
last
year and have great knowledge of basic concepts. I am pursuing Correct article usage
a Masters
Masters
in English.
Fix the agreement mistake
Master
Finally
, I would really appreciate you
if you Correct pronoun usage
it
give
me a chance to participate in that work. Wrong verb form
gave
Moreover
, from June - August I am on holiday. I want to utilise this
time in volunteering work. Please let me know if you require any further
information. My email ID is [email protected].
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours Faithfully,
HarveySubmitted by parvinderp93 on
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task response
Ensure that the letter addresses all the points mentioned in the prompt. Provide a clear and detailed explanation on why you want to do unpaid work on the programme, why you are a suitable candidate, and when you are available to teach.
coherence and cohesion
Organize the letter into clear paragraphs with topic sentences and supporting details. Use appropriate transition words and phrases to improve coherence and cohesion.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite