People should be at least 21 years old before they are allowed to drive a car. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays,

people

have different opinions on whether is it important the minimum

age

for driving 21. In my opinion, except in certain cases, I largely agree with the notion that

people

should

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at least 21 years old because of the knowledge factor

besides

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a lot of traffic. First and foremost, some

people

including me support the argument that before the

age

of

21

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no one has the right to drive a car and believe it is beneficial in terms of reduction in an accident on the roads.

This

is because escalation in vehicles on

road

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leads to congestion and

this

is the main reason behind a lot of vehicle collisions because

people

are always in

hurry

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and avoid rules.

For example

, "The Times" published

according to

a survey conducted in 2022 that an 87% increase in road accidents as compared to a decade ago was only because of amateur drivers.

Hence

, increase in fatality rates. Moving on, another worth mentioning point is children only focus on studies rather than having fun on highways with friends. To be more specific, if the government does not issue driving licences to those under 21

then

individuals have to focus towards their careers, despite wasting time on riding cars which results in both an increase in pollution and risk rate.

For instance

, Tim Cooper, a researcher from Sheffield Hallam University in the UK points out that most of the students did not attend their classes and spent time riding their bikes or cars only to show off or for fame. Shifting to the other aspect, another school of thought opposes the idea of issuing a licence after the

age

of 21.

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may think that individuals only learn to drive after a lot of practice and

this

is the factor which strengthens their viewpoint. Practice makes a man perfect,

although

life plays a vital role. In conclusion, the community find it hard to reach a consensus that which approach is better for driving under 21 or over 21. Despite a few

people

saying that practice removes shyness, I tend to favour that a minimum of 21 years of

age

is important for driving because of the

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in accidents and knowledge of the person.