In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In many countries, some

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argue that it is important to develop transportation, especially building new railway lines in order to more convenient life in cities,

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others think that the investment should give to existing public

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, buses or metros. In the following paragraphs, both views

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topic will be discussed in detail. On the one hand, it is undeniable that transportation is important for everyone ,especially sky trains or the metro, so it should have been constructed and improve new lines in order to

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them immediately.

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is because the new railway is able to reduce traffic congestion in a city and

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enhance environmental friendly.

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will

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private cars minimally and they will able to manage their time easier when they would face to rush-hour in the morning.

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, not only reduce air pollution but

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be a basic infrastructure for the population in countries.

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, some

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believe that money should be spent for improve in another way

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in some countries being extremely poor. To illustrate, Thailand has several obsolete buses, trains and boats.

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, spending payment to develop

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old transportation will help

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who do not have sufficient money to

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the railways because the cost of railways tickets is more expensive than the bus. To summarise, some nations around the world require to have fresh railway lines because it will make

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go to work faster.

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, some

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think that the government should spend their tax to develop public

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first. In my opinion, spending money on the existing public

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is important more than constructing new trains,

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is because most

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are able to

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much more than railways,

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, the government should be aware of payment for basic infrastructure.