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The two tables below show the exchange students from universities in Europe to Australia between 2007 and 2009. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two tables below show the exchange students from universities in Europe to Australia between 2007 and 2009. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table graphs give information about the
number
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 of exchange
students
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 coming from universities in
Europe
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 to
Australia
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. The figures compare data collected between 2007 and 2009.
Overall
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, more
students
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 from
Europe
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 are going to
study
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 at a university in
Australia
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 during the two-year
study
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 survey.
Whereas
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 the
number
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 of
students
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 coming from
Australia
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 to have an education in the schools in
Europe
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 are the same in both years of 2007 and 2009. In detail, in the year ,2007 there were a total of 189
students
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 in
Europe
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 who opted to
study
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 in a foreign country. Most of them came from the country of France.
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,
although
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 there was a significant increase in the
number
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 of scholars going to
Australia
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 at 226, most of them did not come from France anymore but from the nation of Germany.
On the other hand
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, those who were from
Australia
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 that wanted to
study
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 in
Europe
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 had the same total
number
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 in 2007 and 2009 at 152 exchange
students
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. In 2007, France is the leading choice country
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 exchange
students
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 from
Australia
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 and continued to increase in
number
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 in 2009 to 58%. Sweden and the United Kingdom had a notable decrease from 33 and 32
,
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 to 27 and 23, respectively. It is highly obvious as well that Germany increased in numbers from 18 to 26
students
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 in 2 years' time.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, students, europe, australia, study with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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