The two tables below show the exchange students from universities in Europe to Australia between 2007 and 2009. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table graphs give information about the
number
of exchange students
coming from universities in Europe
to Australia
. The figures compare data collected between 2007 and 2009.
Overall
, more students
from Europe
are going to study
at a university in Australia
during the two-year study
survey. Whereas
the number
of students
coming from Australia
to have an education in the schools in Europe
are the same in both years of 2007 and 2009.
In detail, in the year ,2007 there were a total of 189 students
in Europe
who opted to study
in a foreign country. Most of them came from the country of France. However
, although
there was a significant increase in the number
of scholars going to Australia
at 226, most of them did not come from France anymore but from the nation of Germany.
On the other hand
, those who were from Australia
that wanted to study
in Europe
had the same total number
in 2007 and 2009 at 152 exchange students
. In 2007, France is the leading choice country of
exchange Change preposition
for
students
from Australia
and continued to increase in number
in 2009 to 58%. Sweden and the United Kingdom had a notable decrease from 33 and 32,
to 27 and 23, respectively. It is highly obvious as well that Germany increased in numbers from 18 to 26 Remove the comma
apply
students
in 2 years' time.Submitted by kmaegalilee on
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