There is a problem with the changing rooms in the sports centre that you visit. You have complained several times but with no success. Write a letter to the manager of the sports centre.

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Dear Sir or Madam , I am one of your loyal and regular customers.

However

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this

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time I am writing in order to complain about the poor customer

service

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that I received a month ago from your sports

centre

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. I am not at all pleased with

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service

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the service

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and I hope you will take prompt action after investigating

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letter. I went to your sports

centre

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and

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when I entered

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the changing room , it had not been cleaned , the air conditioning was not working. In fact , I did not pay much attention to

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issue until the problem became more frequent. After that , I told

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situation to the

centre

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's customer

service

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. They took 2 days to resolve

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problem. After 3 days I became to the sports

centre

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and I checked

changing

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to change

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rooms but nothing

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changed.

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is a frustrating and daunting experience that I have had with your

service

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and I would ask you to investigate the reason for

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poor customer support. I look forward to your reply and a resolution to my problem. Yours faithfully , Kate.

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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

1 paragraphs

188 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

frequent user
specific issues
cleanliness
hygiene
broken facilities
lack of supplies
address the issue
response
emphasize
well-maintained
comfort
hygiene
politely
firmly
request
resolve
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