There is a problem with the changing rooms in the sports centre that you visit. You have complained several times but with no success. Write a letter to the manager of the sports centre.

Dear Sir or Madam , I am one of your loyal and regular customers.
However
,
this
time I am writing in order to complain about the poor customer
service
that I received a month ago from your sports
centre
. I am not at all pleased with
service
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and I hope you will take prompt action after investigating
this
letter. I went to your sports
centre
and
and
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when I entered
to
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the changing room , it had not been cleaned , the air conditioning was not working. In fact , I did not pay much attention to
this
issue until the problem became more frequent. After that , I told
this
situation to the
centre
's customer
service
. They took 2 days to resolve
this
problem. After 3 days I became to the sports
centre
and I checked
changing
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rooms but nothing
has
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changed.
This
is a frustrating and daunting experience that I have had with your
service
and I would ask you to investigate the reason for
this
poor customer support. I look forward to your reply and a resolution to my problem. Yours faithfully , Kate.
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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