The bar chart below shows the numbers of men and women attending various evening courses at an adult education centre in the year 2009. The pie chart gives information about the ages of these course participants. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The charts give to illustrate the numbers of males and females attending various evening courses with
the
different subjects at an adult education centre in one period.
Correct article usage
apply
Overall
, the pie chart showed both men
and women
of different ages attend in four subjects namely, drama, painting, sculpture and language.
On the one hand, men
are less than women
in drama with a percentage of about 10%, while
women
are higher with 20%. However
, women
are still at
the trend in painting approximately around 30% though Change preposition
in
men
less by 5% than females.
On the other hand
, men
become higher than women
in sculpture with a proportion of 10% while
girls dive by 30%. Also
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