In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays,
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plenty of researchers say that types of important to our daily travelling
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transports
transport
might be without a
driver
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we need to outline the positive and negative aspects of driverless vehicles. On the one hand,
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could show us the following advantages like more calm roads without
driver
's argues and safe travelling.
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, some people with cars often
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their acknowledge about traffic rules
while
road movements and they even make difficulties
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other person
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.
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, we would have a very
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and safe
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without any misunderstandings with
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because we won't have
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. On other hand, there are some troubles with driverless vehicles like not having
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human
control
inside the car and possible transport
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crashes
. As a matter of fact, human
control
is crucial for passengers, because they can properly discuss
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the details of
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destination. We
also
need someone who can
control
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car, bus or truck because if it suddenly
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this
person will know
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to deal with it.
Overall
, if
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type of transportation will be popular in the world, it would be very useful for clients, but we still need a person who should know how to drive and
control
the vehicle.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • driverless vehicles
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • increased safety
  • reduced traffic congestion
  • improved efficiency
  • accessibility
  • disabled
  • elderly
  • job displacement
  • privacy concerns
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