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the table and the charts below give information the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in a one area of britian. the table shows where the money vame from and the chart shows how it was distributed

the table and the charts below give information the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in a one area of britian. the table shows where the money vame from and the chart shows how it was distributed
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The table and the charts below illustrate data about the
police
's incomes and expenses between 2017 and 2018 in
a
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the
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 field of
britian
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Britain
.
Overall
, the
police
 budget
have
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has
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 a few
sources
 of costs
such
 as national
government
, local
taxses
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taxes
 and other resources.
However
, the executive department of
Britian
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Britain
 has a big
supporting
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support
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to
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for
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 the
police
 system.
Although
, local taxes and other
sources
 like grants provide
significantly
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significant
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 cash
to
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apply
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there
Firstly
, the
police
 had
been
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apply
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some
incomes
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income
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 from
a
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the
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 national
government
, local taxes and other. There were
number
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numbers
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 175.5, 91,2 and 38
million
.
Moreover
, a national
government
 the first in
list
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the list
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which
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of which
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 the
police
 purchase power had been utterly 304.7
million
. The
police
 stations did a lot of expenses
such
 as salaries, buildings and transport and technology 75%, 17% and 8%
accordingly
.
Likewise
, first and foremost a year later the
police
 had tremendously cash
as
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apply
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by 2017. In spite of there
were
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being
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 three
sources
 of
cashes
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cash
amounts of cash
flows of cash
fistfuls of cash
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 and a national
government
almost
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of almost
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 200 m, local taxes
just
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were just
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 above a hundred
million
 and other
sources
just
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were just
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 almost a half
million
 respectively.
In contrast
, they had plenty of
stationholds
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station holds
 so
important
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the important
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 rate become salaries 69%,
next
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the next
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 stage was building and transport 17% and the end technology 14% respectively.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "such".
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words police, sources, government, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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