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People nowadays tend to take their family to another country when they work abroad. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages ?

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Sometimes people got job offers to
work
 abroad,
when
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 they consider the terms of the opportunity one of the most difficult decisions
thay
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they
 have to make is whether or not
taking
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 their family with them. We get closer
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this
 point by discussing the pros and cons of
such
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, in behalf of the best interests
for
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 the family. When an individual has
an
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 offer to
work
oversees
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overseas
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, regularly means the company has to sponsor the employee as needed for the person to be able to
work
al
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 least within the same conditions as he was in his native nation.
Moreover
, if
familly
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family
 is included as part of the deal they will be taken care
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 the business as well,
therefore
 from
this
 point of view all seem to
work
.
In addition
,
keep
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 living all together as a family is a
powerfull
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powerful
 reason to take family abroad.
Also
, the opportunity to experiment
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new country and its culture is probably a once life experience, not only because will be able to share local customs
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 but
also
 will meet a wide range of new places.
On the other hand
, the fact to be moved out to a new land implies
meet
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 new people and
leave
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 old
friend
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friends
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 and relatives behind, at least for a certain period of time.
This
 is a reality not all the
familiy
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family
 members will manage
accordingly
.
For instance
, imagine either a boy or
girld
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girl
 friend of one of the family's sons. They
evetually
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eventually
 need to somehow break up after gone. In conclusion, to have the chance to live abroad for a certain period of time
as a result
 of a job offer, in my opinion, the advantages outweigh
disadvantages
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 if the whole family moves out a
live
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this
 new experience.
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