describe a custom from your country that you would like people from other countries to adopt, explain your choice, using specific reasons and example.

There are different customs, beliefs and cultures in each
country
that distinguish it from the others. It is very common to pass these
values
down to the next generation to keep them alive. Being family-oriented and friendly to strangers are two customs in my
country
. I will explain more detail in
this
essay. The tradition in my
country
really
values
the meaning of family. First of all, it is very common to live under the same roof with your parents until you get married. Even though people might think it makes us dependent, it allows us to learn about certain traditional
values
and respect the elders.
Secondly
, there are a lot of gatherings.
For example
, we tend to conduct several different events during pregnancy and after the baby is born. These
values
create strong bonds in relations.
In addition
, even though we prioritize our relatives, we are
also
open to strangers.
Firstly
, most people are not afraid to help strangers indeed.
For example
, we are very happy to help to navigate directions if somebody gets lost.
Moreover
, we love smiling and greeting everyone. It may sound quirky but just normal behaviour in my
country
. To sums it up, we love our relatives and spend most of our time with them.
However
, we
also
care about others and would love to help a person whom we're not familiar with.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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