A cafe near your home puts some chairs and tables on the pavement for customers. This creates a problem for you. Write a letter to the cafe manager to complain about this matter. In your letter describe the problem; explain how it affects you; say what you will do if this matter is not resolved.

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Dear Sir, I am writing

this

letter to complain regarding the inconvenience pedestrians are facing because of your coffee shop. I reside in the Cornwall apartments which is two blocks away from your shop. I need to walk to the nearby metro station to attend the office on

daily

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a daily

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basis. In the early hours, streets are generally packed with people who are rushing to catch the train on time .

While

crossing your café we should be extra careful and walk slowly to avoid getting hit by the chairs or tables on the footpath. To

reach

Verb problem

meet

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the customer's demand, your shop arranges seating on the footpath on

regular

Correct article usage

a regular

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basis.

In addition

, waiters are busy serving coffee and breakfast.

Last

week,

while

crossing your cafe, a waiter tripped and

spilled

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spilt

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entire coffee on my dress. Because of

this

,incident I had to apply for half day leave for being late to the office. I would request you take immediate action and arrange an alternative location.

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no action is taken

then

I will be registering a complaint against your café in the municipal office and request them to take the necessary steps. Yours faithfully, Praveena

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task response

Ensure to explicitly state all three points that were asked for in the letter prompt: describing the problem, explaining how it affects you, and stating what you will do if the matter is not resolved.

coherence and cohesion

Organize the content of the letter in a more coherent and structured manner, with clear topic sentences for each paragraph and logical flow of ideas from one paragraph to the next.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

193 words

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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Some species of animals are almost extinct; and many others seem to be fast approaching a similar risk. What are the reasons for this? What should be done to solve this problem?

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