TOPIC: More and more people in developing countries are purchasing cars for the first time. What problems does this cause? What do you think is a possible solution?

In developing nations, there has been a huge increase in the

number

of private vehicles sold to first-time buyers. The principal

problems

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causes are pollution and traffic congestion, and the most viable solution is to impose higher taxes on

cars

. The primary issue developing countries face when their citizens start to buy

cars

is increased pollution.

This

occurs

as a result

of exhaust fume from a tremendous

number

of

cars

which still run on fossil fuels

while

electric

cars

are still in the pipeline. The greater

number

of vehicles on the road is

also

responsible for a rise in traffic jams.

This

is because the infrastructure in developing countries is not fully developed in keeping with the dramatic increases in

cars

on the street.

For example

, citizens in Vietnam can hardly move an inch during rush hour when the narrow streets are clogged with hundreds of

cars

and motorcycles. A solution to these

problems

is to make first-time purchasers pay extra money for their

cars

.

This

would solve the

problems

by making the purchase of a car the low priority for most people as they would be hindered by the quite prohibitive price of

cars

.

As a result

, they would turn to other modes of public transportation

such

as trains or buses, leading to a dramatic decrease in the

number

of automobiles on the street.

For example

, the price of a car in Vietnam is nearly double that in other countries

due to

heavy taxes, making the possession of a car in Vietnam a luxury to most people. In conclusion, the increasing

number

of

cars

sold to first-time buyers leads to air pollution and traffic jams, but these

problems

could be effectively tackled by adding more duty to

cars

.