The diagram below explains the process of making wood pellets, used to heat building
The flow chart provides data on the scheme of wood
pellets
manufacture, that are
used for heating houses.
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is
At
the first Change preposition
In
stage
sawdust is delivered from Add a comma
,stage
sawmill
. Add an article
the sawmill
a sawmill
Then
it is formed into fibers
in a special hammer mill. At the next stage Change the spelling
fibres
fibers
and steam are dampened. Change the spelling
fibres
Further
, pellets
are formed with the use of a pellet machine, where fibers
are put Change the spelling
fibres
throught
special holes. Later, highly mentioned Correct your spelling
through
pellets
are cooled and cleared from the loose dust during the process of vacuuming. At the
end
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,end
pellets
are packed into special 40 pound
bags and sent for sale.
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40-pound
Overall
, the process of manufacturing wood pellets
consists of 7 stages, starting with the arrival of raw materials and ending up with the packaging.Submitted by mgshetler on
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