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The bar chart below shows the production of the world’s oil in OPEC and non-OPEC countries. Write a short report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. Write at least 150 words.

The bar chart below shows the production of the world’s oil in OPEC and non-OPEC countries. Write a short report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. Write at least 150 words.
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The chart provides data on
production
 volumes of
oil
 by
OPEC
 collaboration and by the rest of the world during three time periods.
It is clear that
OPEC
 countries produced almost 10 barrels of the total from 1980 to 2000,
while
 the percentage of
non-
OPEC
 accounted for about 3. The situation changed significantly in 2000
,
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 when
OPEC
 Middle East penetrated the
oil
 market and made up approximately one-third of the total. The proportion of
oil
, produced by other
OPEC
 halved, to only 5. The percentage of
non-
OPEC
production
 increased approximately 2 times during the second period (2000-2010). Probing
further
,
non-
OPEC
production
 shew an upward trend and made up more than 15 from 2010 to 2020. Volumes of
oil
, produced by
OPEC
 associates reduced significantly during the third period.
Overall
, the share of
non-
OPEC
 countries increased marginally from 1980 to 2020,
while
 countries, related to the
OPEC
 organization reduced their
production
 capacities.
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