Nowadays, child labor has become a major concern. why it is so? What can be done to solve this problem?

Children
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labor
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is often cited as a learning issue of
21st
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the 21st
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century and a top priority around the world.
This
essay will show you what is
cause
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the cause
a cause
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of
children
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child
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labor
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labour
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and
solution
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the solution
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to
splve
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solve
this
problem. On the one hand,there
are
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multiple
cause
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causes
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of
this
menace.
Firstly
,one of the biggest reasons behind
this
concern is
that
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the
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high
cost
of
education
.The
cost
of
education
is
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increase
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from time to time.A lot of
students
are unable to pay school
fee
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fees
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,so a lot of
students
work
part-time.
However
,it is very bad for the
students
because they can not focus on
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the study
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study
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the class.
For example
,some
students
work
part-time
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hours every day.
In addition
,
students
have a lot of things.
Such
as
homeworks
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homework
.So they can not
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enough sleep.
Secondly
,inflation is the most important cause in some countries.
This
is because one
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person's
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income can not support the others.
Also
,single mothers,
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disabled have no choice but to have their
children
work
to support the family.
On the other hand
,there are several
solution
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solutions
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to solve
children
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labor
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labour
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.
Firstly
,the most solution is
that
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to control
prices
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the prices
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of basic necessities.If lowing prices,it
easier
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is easier
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for families to be self-sufficient and not have to put their
children
to.
work
.
Furthermore
,
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goverment
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government
should
more cheap
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cheaper
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to
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for to
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cost
fo
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of
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education
.If it is done in that way,
students
more
foucus
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focus
focused
on
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the study
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study
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studying
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.
This
is because
students
can getting
of
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enough sleep and no stress. In conclusion,
inflatior
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inflation
and the
riging
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rising
rigging
cost
of
education
have led to an increase in child
labor
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labour
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.If most
children
are
laboring
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labouring
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,they can not
foucas
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focus
in class and
children
can not get
of
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enought knowlages
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enough knowledge
.It is very bad for
socirty
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society
.So,
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the goverment
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goverment
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government
governments
need
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needs
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to take action.
Such
as,
to control
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controlling
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prices
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the prices
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of basic necessities and more cheap
cost
of
education
.
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